STORY 1 - JOJOR
STORY 2 - ME
STORY 3 - MICHAEL
One of the problems with Story 1, is that there is no character development as there is no clear change in the character in the beginning compared to the end and so it's harder for the audience to become interested in the short film, there is no actual meaning behind it & resolution to the story, because of this it does not make sense. This can lead to the audience being confused and dissatisfied with the short, however, Story 2 does have character development whereby the main character Charlotte, learns a lesson about greed and so becomes a better person, this story is better as it teaches the audience and adds depth to the story. This also keeps the readers interested and gives them more chance of remembering the story in the future. As well as seeing a clear change in the character at the end of the story, there is also changes between other characters who are affected by Charlottes growth throughout the story. Story 3 also has some character development, also leading to the character learning not to be greedy and to be appreciative of what they have (being colour blind as opposed to being completely blind). This characters emotions play a huge role as he goes from being miserable at the beginning to even worse at the end of the story, feeling resentment and regret. This teaches people to be grateful for what they have as there is always someone worse off than you. This led to a group decision of Story 2 being better in terms of character development.
Some practical issues with Story 1 are that we would need to find a larger cast than we have available, and also someone who can drive which may be difficult as we are only 17. Also we would need to find a parent willing to play a role which may be difficult as they are often too busy to take a large amount of time out of their day for 2 or more days. This would make it difficult for us to produce the film and so we would have to make adjustments. Story 2 requires us to either use CGI or make our own 'red blob' meaning we would need very good ICT skills or to find someone who is very creative, if not done properly our film would not be taken seriously as the blob would not look real and so this is a major issue as we can't just purchase one. Also being able to see the future in the blob would be extremely difficult and possible too advanced for our technical skills. As well as this, we would also need to find 4 dogs and control them when and when we are not filming which would cause a huge distraction and could result in our film not being of a high standard. Not only this but the dogs need to be trained, which we do not have the time to do. Plus, Story 2 requires a large cast of many different clients which may be difficult to find over such short notice with little time to film, and not all of them may be able to take part in the filming. Lastly, Story 3 requires us to find someone who is able to put contact lenses in and be comfortable with putting them in on camera, this would also mean the actor would have to be the main character. Also, as we want to show nice sights for example London, we would need permission to film in areas so far away as the cameras are not ours.
STORY 2 - ME
STORY 3 - MICHAEL
One of the problems with Story 1, is that there is no character development as there is no clear change in the character in the beginning compared to the end and so it's harder for the audience to become interested in the short film, there is no actual meaning behind it & resolution to the story, because of this it does not make sense. This can lead to the audience being confused and dissatisfied with the short, however, Story 2 does have character development whereby the main character Charlotte, learns a lesson about greed and so becomes a better person, this story is better as it teaches the audience and adds depth to the story. This also keeps the readers interested and gives them more chance of remembering the story in the future. As well as seeing a clear change in the character at the end of the story, there is also changes between other characters who are affected by Charlottes growth throughout the story. Story 3 also has some character development, also leading to the character learning not to be greedy and to be appreciative of what they have (being colour blind as opposed to being completely blind). This characters emotions play a huge role as he goes from being miserable at the beginning to even worse at the end of the story, feeling resentment and regret. This teaches people to be grateful for what they have as there is always someone worse off than you. This led to a group decision of Story 2 being better in terms of character development.
Some practical issues with Story 1 are that we would need to find a larger cast than we have available, and also someone who can drive which may be difficult as we are only 17. Also we would need to find a parent willing to play a role which may be difficult as they are often too busy to take a large amount of time out of their day for 2 or more days. This would make it difficult for us to produce the film and so we would have to make adjustments. Story 2 requires us to either use CGI or make our own 'red blob' meaning we would need very good ICT skills or to find someone who is very creative, if not done properly our film would not be taken seriously as the blob would not look real and so this is a major issue as we can't just purchase one. Also being able to see the future in the blob would be extremely difficult and possible too advanced for our technical skills. As well as this, we would also need to find 4 dogs and control them when and when we are not filming which would cause a huge distraction and could result in our film not being of a high standard. Not only this but the dogs need to be trained, which we do not have the time to do. Plus, Story 2 requires a large cast of many different clients which may be difficult to find over such short notice with little time to film, and not all of them may be able to take part in the filming. Lastly, Story 3 requires us to find someone who is able to put contact lenses in and be comfortable with putting them in on camera, this would also mean the actor would have to be the main character. Also, as we want to show nice sights for example London, we would need permission to film in areas so far away as the cameras are not ours.
In Story 1, one logical casualty is that there is a car meant to be driving past the main character with 2 hooded figures in it, however, there is no explanation as to why the car is there, where it's going or where it came from and who the people are inside the car. This leads to confusion as the mystery still isn't resolved by the end of the story, making it irrelevant. In Story 3, one logical causality that we thought of was how this student suddenly stumbled upon the contact lenses out of all the people in the world, even though this is the foundation of our story. In Story 2 the 'blob' gives a fantasy theme and this is a logical causality as this doesn't happen everyday, and it not someone you would just expect to happen to you whilst walking in the park, but node again this is the foundation of the story and so it can be dismissed.
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